On Writing

24
Oct
The Rorschach Test With Teeth

The Rorschach Test With Teeth

Someone on Twitter wished authors could be “mystical” again—writing stories that let readers project their own meanings without accountability. That’s not mysticism. That’s cowardice dressed in artistic pretension. My novels are Rorschach tests, but the inkblot has teeth. They contain explicit moral
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15
Oct
Men Aren’t Eggs: A Love Letter to the Westmark Trilogy

Men Aren’t Eggs: A Love Letter to the Westmark Trilogy

Lloyd Alexander’s Westmark trilogy won the 1982 National Book Award, yet his Prydain series has 240,000 Goodreads ratings while Westmark has just 10,900—a 22-to-1 disparity. I’m a veteran who writes about war’s moral costs, and Alexander’s trilogy shaped how I understand justified violence and polit
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14
Oct
Modern YA Is Failing Teenagers—I’m Stealing it Back

Modern YA Is Failing Teenagers—I’m Stealing it Back

I queried *Doors to the Stars* to over two dozen agents. Zero full manuscript requests. My 11-year-old daughter stayed up all night devouring it. My 19-year-old son texted me at 2 AM about plot twists. But publishing professionals? Not interested. The book features a 16-year-old scavenger who discov
12 min read
10
Oct
Ripping the Guardrails off Literary Genre Fiction

Ripping the Guardrails off Literary Genre Fiction

If content warnings function as marketing copy for you rather than deal-breakers, keep reading. I write dark, pulse-pounding literary genre fiction where characters fail people they love, moral complexity doesn’t resolve into easy answers, and consequences are permanent. Jasmine survives sex traffic
10 min read
03
Oct
Publishers Are Using AI to Screen Manuscripts—And Great Books Are Dying in the Slush Pile

Publishers Are Using AI to Screen Manuscripts—And Great Books Are Dying in the Slush Pile

Publishers are using AI to screen manuscripts before human eyes ever see them. The result? Your Renaissance fantasy gets flagged for “misgendering” because your heroine is disguised as a boy. Your PTSD story gets rejected as “gratuitous violence.” Your satire about racism gets auto-rejected as racis
17 min read
28
Jul
Write What You Love… To Market

Write What You Love… To Market

Asking “should I write what I love or write to market?” is the wrong question. The writing world has manufactured a false binary that’s keeping writers from building sustainable careers. It’s not about compromise. It’s about understanding what you genuinely love writing and finding readers who are h
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13
Jul
Transcending the Strong Female Character™ Trope

Transcending the Strong Female Character™ Trope

Not every strong female character is “woke trash”—but the lazy Strong Female Character™ trope deserves its criticism. Lisa Kuznak’s viral defense of heroines like Ripley and Sarah Connor sparked a crucial conversation: What truly separates inspiring warriors from one-dimensional girl-boss clichés? E
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07
Jun
Using AI for Writing Feedback

Using AI for Writing Feedback

Grok “beta reading” a scene from Scott Lynch’s The Lies of Locke Lamora is a perfect example of why you absolutely should not use AI like Grok for feedback on your writing.
14 min read
01
Jun
Authors, Please Don’t Save the Cat

Authors, Please Don’t Save the Cat

Plotting a novel using the Save the Cat method, popularized by Blake Snyder, can be inadvisable for several reasons, particularly
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